Tino Pai Charmy! I like how you have added music in the background. You spoke clearly and presented your ideas in order. I like how you are considering the positive side of things despite these tough times. It’s awesome that you are still talking to your friends during lockdown.
Hi Miss Rose! Thank you so much Miss Rose! I think you should look at my last post I made about making an Infinity Cube. I really can't wait to see your new comment there! :-)
Charmy - I LOVE IT! I agree with Miss Rose, good choice of background music. I think your opening statement really grabs the attention of the listener. IMPORTANT messages. I also think you have good pace - this is where you don't talk too quickly or too slowly. I find I can often talk a bit fast! Well done!
Tino Pai Charmy! I like how you have added music in the background. You spoke clearly and presented your ideas in order. I like how you are considering the positive side of things despite these tough times. It’s awesome that you are still talking to your friends during lockdown.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the awesome work! Can't wait to see more.
Hi Miss Rose! Thank you so much Miss Rose! I think you should look at my last post I made about making an Infinity Cube. I really can't wait to see your new comment there! :-)
ReplyDeleteGood job and I agree It is a bit squeaky.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Noah. Finally someone agrees that it's SQUEAKY. Miss Rose didn't agree. She said it doesn't sound that bad. To me it's TERRIBLE!
Charmy - I LOVE IT! I agree with Miss Rose, good choice of background music. I think your opening statement really grabs the attention of the listener. IMPORTANT messages. I also think you have good pace - this is where you don't talk too quickly or too slowly. I find I can often talk a bit fast! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Miss Harland. I thought that I made it bad by adding the music. I felt like my voice was squeaky. What do you think?
DeleteHey Charmy your voice wasn't squeaky at all ,it actually fit the music that you chose. Where did you get the music from?
ReplyDeleteHi Diana! Are you sure the voice wasn't squeaky? I got the music from you tube.
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